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Write a sentence about the house’s walls.
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Write a sentence about the noises from inside the house.
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Instructions
- Copy each of your recrafted sentences into a paragraph below.
- Add another free writing paragraph about your house and share on your blog.
As I walked around the haunted house I saw the messed up and wrecked windows. The houses walls are pesty and old school fashion. The noises inside the house were like a person getting choked and an awful noise of dogs crying.
As I was walking around the panmure basin I was being an idiot and running into the bushes to find something. When I was walking into the bushes I found a really broken house just sitting on the grass.
After that I heard a very choked up sound, the sound was coming from the house. I don’t know why but I just ran inside the house to check what the noise was, as I ran into the creepy house I froze and almost went unconscious. Standing right in the middle of the house was a little girl, her head was facing, not moving at all, dressed in olden day clothes and black hair. I was going to check if the little girl needed help so I walked in front of her tapped the girl on the shoulder, There was a moment of complete silence, then
The little girl's skin went extremely pale and claws started to form over her nails. I started to get a little scared. Lastly the little girl started to lift her head up, as she started to lift up her head I saw her face, The girls face had beedie and black eyes she had a mouth but no mouth just a poached mouth with dirty and sharp teeth then crash! The girl leaped on me and wrecked her sharp bloody teeth in my neck and then I died the end.
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