My writing sample.

One day I was going hiking with my uncle.

When me and my uncle were hiking up Mount Everest

I was using my telescope to spot anything suspicious.

After three hours I spotted an object in the distance

my uncle told me to stay low because it might be

a wild animal or some weird coyote.

Me and my uncle slowly walked towards the object 

and when we got closer we peared our eyes out 

but it was just some dreadful cabin but something

creeped me out.

There was a sign that said abandoned folk

do not enter my uncle tippy toed to the

door and and slowly nocked and when the door

opened this man that looked like he was in his 

50s he was rusty and there were scars all over

his arms.

My eyes were so terrified when I saw that

the man was holding a pocket knife 

my uncle pulled my hand then we

boosted our way back down Mount Everest.

After that my uncle contact the police to search 

for the man in Mount Everest.